My horror/science fiction story “The Paw” was just published in Our Washington Pastime.
I invite you to read it online.
Cheers,
Shawn
29 Monday Aug 2011
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My horror/science fiction story “The Paw” was just published in Our Washington Pastime.
I invite you to read it online.
Cheers,
Shawn
25 Thursday Aug 2011
Posted in The Writing Life
Tags
Emma Stone, Fiction, First drafts, jerry maguire, Jim Carrey, love video, trulife, writers, writing
After seeing Jim Carrey’s video love note to Emma Stone, either he’s channeling Charlie Sheen or he’s really, and I mean, really bad at asking a girl out.
It’s an eerie combination of overly earnest, creepy, and only vaguely funny. Sure, what 22-year-old woman doesn’t want to hear a guy who’s nearly 50 talk about their future of chubby, freckle-faced babies and how the ravages of time affect his bodily functions?
The answer: all of them.
Many younger writers, so full of the need to express themselves (they’re so deep!), pull a Jim Carrey. They pour out every emotion, every bit of angst. They’re frustrated and railing against something. They’re begging and screaming for attention, not caring that it’s attention for all the wrong reasons. It’s like Jerry MacGuire: “Sooth me. Save me! Love me!”
Editors and readers will be more than happy to ignore this self-centered, whining story. And if that doesn’t drive the message home then the stack of rejection letters will. Because what Jim Carrey dashed off was a terrible, clumsy attempt at courting — the equivalent to a horrible first draft.
Hey, we’ve all been there. I’ve deleted or tossed hundreds of stories. Thousands of pages. It’s the fawnlike steps toward becoming a confidant writer, one who can write about what he or she cares about while making it interesting to an audience. Simply put: Forget your ego. Realize you that it’s about them — their wants and needs.
But write your heart out. That’s what first drafts are for. Just make sure that you revise and edit until the story has that same effect on your audience, not just you.
If that seems like an alien concept, then watch this video and pretend you’re Emma Stone. That’s probably how your readers feel — they’re just too nice to tell you.
23 Tuesday Aug 2011
Posted in The Writing Life
Tags
Literary Agent, Nathan Bransford, novel, overnight success, sara gruen, shirley jackson, stephanie meyer, water for elephants
Shirley Jackson wrote her best-known story “The Lottery” in one draft after a long walk. It was featured in the New Yorker and anthologized countless times.
Stephanie Meyer says the idea for Twilight came to her in a dream and took just three months to write, according to a blog by Literary Agent Nathan Bransford. An editor read the draft on an airplane and as soon as it touched down she frantically called Meyer’s agent to buy the manuscript before someone else could. Meyer had never written before attempting Twilight.
“It’s tempting to think all it takes is
an idea and a wisp of effort. Very tempting indeed,” Bransford writes. “The truth is a lot more banal: It takes a lot of work.”
More often the path to any real success comes only after late nights and early mornings, failed stories and novels, and fizzled attempts to connect with readers. Good writing, likewise, just seems effortless. Most writers refine their scenes moment by moment, like needlework, to capture the story exactly.
I’m not at all surprised that Sara Gruen, someone I had assumed was an overnight success, is not one at all.
She was a laid off technical writer when she turned to writing fiction. Water for Elephants, her breakthrough novel, was her third and her previous publisher rejected it. I’m sure there were nights when she thought about giving up writing, moments of frustration that interviewers usually don’t ask about.
When I read …Elephants, I assumed it was just a lucky break. I should have known the old cliche is still true: luck is just hard work meeting opportunity.
Anything worth doing isn’t easy. If you want to be a writer or any kind of artist, take the time to hone your craft in a class or in a group. Work on your own. Meet people and learn how others have become successful. Most of all, practice to discover what your vision will add and what will make you distinctive.
I leave you with Branson’s final thought:
Each journey is our own, and we’re all the better for it. Rather than wishing for lightning to strike quickly, it’s better to enjoy seeing it flash in the distance and know that our time will come.
17 Wednesday Aug 2011
Posted in Guest Blogging, Stories
Check back all this weekend for my live updates from The Philadelphia Folk Festival on CultureMob.
Also, I will be hosting a spoken word programat the festival at 5 p.m. on Friday at the
Lobby Stage. Remember that time you saw the tents fly over the trees? What about the haunted house camp site? Stop by to hear true stories of festivals of years past and share your own at this all-ages program. The best storyteller will receive a special surprise.
08 Monday Aug 2011
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I have two short stories coming out in the next few months:
Lastly, I just published a review on CultureMob of Ken Denmead’s book Geek Dad’s Guide to Weekend Fun.
05 Friday Aug 2011
Posted in Stories
I visited my cousin in Phoenix because he promised we would check out the “dessert animals” together. In the plane I dreamed of rare delights: sucking down a Jell-O sidewinder shooter; nibbling a chocolate scorpion. “So when should we go to the zoo?” he asked at the airport, heat shimmering off the sand. When he dropped my luggage in his car’s backseat a set of brand new silverware clanked. I thought, damn you, typos. Damn you.(Entered in Painted Bride Quarterly‘s Sidecar #5 Contest)